New and Last Storyboard/Timeline

Due to the change of plan, we needed new story boards and time lines. We also wanted to ensure that our new story boards and time lines were more specific. Shown below are the time lines we have drawn. They are rather rough but, I believe will be essential to give our filming the push it needs. 
Rough time line: 

Specific Time line:

The first minute of our film: 

For the first minute of our film, we have made a timeline shown above. Within this minute we have a clear change of scene, allowing the video to remain interesting to the viewer  The transition from the school classroom BACK TO the bathroom will hopefully be a lovely transition as we will make Alice perform the same action. This will allow the two scenes to link, ensuring that the viewer understands that there is a link in the emotions of the character and the setting.

Change of Scene happens at: 

- 18 seconds

- 34 seconds

The Second minute of our film: 

Above, is the second minute of our film.The action is constantly building. The transition from the bathroom scene (at the very beginning) and the outside scene (with Jessie and Alice) is something we hope will appear very successful and professional. We will have it 'Fade to Black' which will emphasize the fact that it is a change in scene. 

Change of Scene happens at: 

- 1 Minute, 5 seconds

- 1 Minute, 36 Seconds

The end of our video: 

The last part of our video will contain a lot of action (especially in the 'Flashback' section). In this section we will cut and fade to all the different scenes and moments within the beginning two minutes of the video. I believe this will increase the drama at the time and we will ensure that each cut goes to the beat of the song.

Change of Scene happens at: 

- 2 Minutes, 9 Seconds

- 2 Minutes, 33 Seconds

New story line: 

CHANGE OF PLAN

WE HAVE A CHANGE OF PLAN

After looking at the filming we had already done, none of my group felt happy with our product. We felt like the story line was not realistic enough to have Alice wanting to self harm. Therefore, we decided to add a controversial scene. We decided to make Alice a homosexual, being in love with her friend and confused about her sexuality (having no one to talk to about it). 

Increasing our problems in the major issue that Alice has dyed her hair. This has meant that all our future shots with her will be her with darker hair. We have to re-film everything in order to maintain continuity. 

New Story Line:

Scene one:
- Alice in the bathroom

FADE

Scene two:

- Alice in an empty classroom
- Alice being shouted at by her teacher (we do not need to re-shoot a whole class)

CUT 

Scene Three:

- Back to the bathroom
- Alice in the mirror - Rubbing make up off

CROSS FADE TO BLACK

Scene Four:

- Alice sitting on the bench (outside of the school) 

- Alice tells her friend about her feelings (Jessie) 
- Jessie rejects Alice

Scene Five: 

- Back to the bathroom 
- Takes pills

Scene Six: 

- Getting in the bath 
- Goes under

Time Line of Shots and Angles

Shown below, we have created a type of time line/script where we have written the main shots we will use. We may have to make a more specific one in order to gain complete control over our editing. 

First Story Boards

Shown above is our First Story Board. This board shows our initial ideas. Of course, as every idea does, our idea has since developed and we have been able to improve our story. 

I was able to create a story board on the computer which would allow me to more clearly see the planning and enable me to allow my team members to also gain a clear idea of the developing story line.